Maybe you can be too close to a story. Hunter Kay’s “The Fifth Generation” was set in East Texas.
The protagonist, a recent high school graduate named Charles, is from Palestine, a small town about 30 miles from my grandfather’s farm. A spectacular fight takes place in the pool hall in Jacksonville. The pool hall was about 3 miles from grandfather’s farm.
I read the story seeing places that I know. I’m not sure it would be the same for you.
Charles is a rich kid who doesn’t know what to do with his life and so he goes to a bar, where he gets gloriously drunk and falls in with Gary, a young worker on a drilling rig. The two become partners, hauling pipe for the rig operator, and doing things that young men do when they are just intent on living life, rather than thinking about it.
What has been bred out of us? “Takes five generations to make a gentleman,” my grandmother used to say.
Charles finds himself changing — in some ways for the good. But life on the rig is a vacation for him. It’s not for Gary.
It’s a troubling, haunting story. Kay wrote it when he was in his 20s, working on a master’s thesis at Vanderbilt. The story was admired and anthologized. I never saw another story from him, and I’d have liked to have read more.
He was the kind of fellow I tend to like. He did a bit of gardening and liked to talk about literature. I was glad to hear that had hadn’t stopped writing and was working on a book when he died. I hope someone publishes it.
• Sources: Hunter Kay’s “The Fifth Generation” is in Stories of the Modern South, edited by Benjamin Forkner and Patrick Samway, S.J.; New York, Bantam Books, 1978, pp. 183-206. The quotation is on p. 183.
E. Thomas Wood, “Hunter Kay, 1948-2020”; Medium, June 20, 2020. It’s here:
https://medium.com/@ethomaswood/hunter-kay-1948-2020-e3b833bbcdf2